试图向乐队工作6HSC English, but are struggling with how to construct paragraphs well in youressays还别担心，因为我们现在会打破Teel段落结构！
Here’s the ultimate guide to writing a TEEL paragraph that you’re proud of, so you can get an awesome mark in English. You’ll discover our useful techniques for creating cohesive paragraphs.
So, what are you waiting for? Let’s get started!
What is TEEL and why should you use it?
Using TEE Tables
Constructing the Paragraph
What is TEEL and why should you use it?
Basically, the TEEL structureprovides you with an organised method for getting your point across。Using the TEEL structure can help show your reader that you are able to clearly analyse and respond to a given text and question.
要看到这一点，让我们分解Teel段落结构：
T for Topic Sentence
您段落中的第一句话使读者对您将要谈论的内容良好了解。它有助于directly respond to what the question is asking you here!
例如，
在该段的示例部分中，您需要extract important quotes in your text to support you overarching theme andthesis。
为准备段落的这一部分，在阅读时突出显示，下划线和注释您的文本，它可以为您提供良好的服务。
E解释
So you’ve got your examples written. Now it’s time to准确地解释他们在解释部分中与主题相关的原因。
这将是您段落的大部分。在这里，you will go into further detail, analysing and fleshing out any key points that you want to make.
l用于连接句子
总结你的论点。Highlight how your paragraph supports your overarching thesis/point.
同样重要的是要注意Teel段落结构非常通用，并且as you go into older years, you’ll find that your paragraphs start to look more like TEEEEEEL paragraphs!This just means that your paragraphs will be packed full of examples and explanations, so you’re on the right track.
Pretty simple right? You’ll find thatthe more TEEL paragraphs you write, the more repetitive it gets.
But what happens if you’re in an exam and forget what you were going to write as your explanation or examples?
Using TEE Tables
To avoid sticky situations like these, it can be有助于使用TEE表以明确且逻辑的方式构建您的论点。Check out our article on TEE tables这里！
总结，一个三通浇筑表作为一个组织者ques, examples, and effectsthat you wish to analyse for a specific text.
一般来说，它很有帮助split up your TEE analysis into the various themes您正在探索您的文字。
Here is a sample TEE table forRay Bradbury’s ‘The Pedestrian’, in reference to theDehumanisation的主题:
| Technique | Example | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| 象征主义 | 。。。“The faintest glimmer of firefly light appeared in flickers behind the windows.” | 通过这里的象征，布拉德伯里指的是电视屏幕，大多数居民似乎粘在光源的萤火虫一样。这突出了个人宁愿依赖于他们的T.V.屏幕上所示世界的解释而不是为自己探索世界。 |
| 截断的句子 | 。。。“No profession.” | In this short sentence, the police car is shown to dismiss Mead’s occupation as a writer. This exposes the loss of creativity and expression of thought in the protagonist’s restrictive society. |
| Dark imagery | “Tomb like building...” “…Walking through a graveyard” “Gray phantoms...” | Such imagery exposes the isolated and alienated nature of Mead’s city, suggesting the departure from a state of creativity and the slow takeover of technology and loneliness. |
在此发球台中分析的主题是除了Dehumanisation，这是一个在整个短篇小说中运行的主题！By creating a TEE table, we have successfully analysed the text regarding this theme.
可以为每个主题创建此表and serves as an efficient way for you to organise all your techniques and quotes in a clear manner!
After creating these tables, the only thing left to do is put them in a paragraph format。Since we have our TEE tables for reference, our techniques and examples section of the paragraph is already down pat, and所有留下的东西都是一个统一的论文陈述和结论！
Constructing the Paragraph
We mustensure that the topic sentence, or thesis statement relates not only to the question, but also to the theme we will be exploring。一个好主题句子将尝试在一个简洁的句子中纳入主题和问题。
Similarly,an effective linking sentence serves to sum up the points you have addressed in your paragraphwhile relating them back to the question.
For example, let’s use the TEE table created above to make a TEEL paragraph:
In this paragraph, each section has been highlighted for your convenience,Teel分别是黄色，红色，蓝色和粉红色。
我们终于得到它了！我们已成功使用我们的TEE表来创建简洁和清晰的Teel段落这解决了与文本相关的主题。
请记住，完善您的Teel段段写作技巧的关键是定期练习它们！
If you’d prefer to use a different paragraph structure, then you should check out how theSTEEL paragraph structure,PEEL paragraph structureor the花瓣段结构作品！
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Aarya Mogarkaris an academic tutor and senior coach at Art of Smart Education. She is currently completing her Bachelor’s degree in Economics at the University of New South Wales and tutors students in the areas of English, Economics and Business Studies.
