HSC法律研究论文100马克,where over half of those marks come from essay-based questions.
65 marks, to be precise.
因此，很明显，在HSC法律研究中钉住您的长期响应对于做得好至关重要！
Knowledge of the course content is important, obviously, but being able to organise the information into a concise, coherent and persuasive response is equally important.
This article will not only try to cover,step-by-step, how to write a Band 6 response for HSC Legal Studies,但是，消除了一些常见的法律研究论文写作神话！
我们将研究2015年HSC法律研究论文的犯罪问题：
As the Crime response is shorter than the other essays, it should be around600个字。
但是，同样的一般论文写作原则本文详细信息也适用于第三节中的较长论文问题（两个选项）！
主要区别在于，这两者应该更长，更详细，并提供更多示例，总计1000 words.
Step 1: Introduction
General statement
First of all, make anindisputable general statementabout the topic area. This should not be controversial, or a subjective argument.
Usually, it is safest to generally describe the topic in a contemporary sense.
例如，“存在各种旨在应对跨国犯罪的国内和国际措施”。
论文
Is it absolutely crucial you直接回答问题。
It is painfully common that students simply describe the domestic and international measures used to deal with international crime –don’t do this!
You are telling the marker多么有效他们是，所以这是argumentative, critical response.
确保确切确定howeffective are domestic and international measures in dealing with international crime.
Quantify thisby describing precisely what your viewpoint is, whether that be very effective, somewhat effective or not effective at all.
Whatever your response (and there is not one correct answer, it’s all about how good your argument is as a whole!), this is your main line of argument/thesis.
例如，“Domestic and international measures have only been somewhat effective in engaging with, and combating this type of crime due to *插入原因*”.
Outline your argument
现在您已经概述了论文，您必须list the reasons why.
You’re describing what topics/issues your essay will cover in order to证明您的论文。
一般来说列出主题区域就足够了and you don’t need to get into too much depth.
例如，“这在 *的领域很明显list your topics*”.
Step 2: Body
话题
This essay will prove its thesis by exploring four points: drugs trafficking, arms trade, people smuggling and money laundering. This would makefour paragraphs，每个部分。
However, if one of your topics is more easily understood when explained in two paragraphs, there is nothing to prevent you from doing so.
重要的是确保您保持平衡的论点。
Don’t write 6 paragraphs on one of your points, and squish the last three into a paragraph! Try to place an所有主题的重量相等。
段落结构
用一个主题句。
As in an English essay, this sentence serves to解释您将在段落中介绍的内容，以及与问题/论文的关系。
These need to be clear, as they mark the logical progression of your argument.
例如，“国民之间的合作困难揭示了国际措施处理跨国犯罪的无效性，这在毒品贩运的患病率中得到了明显证明。”
之后，您需要解释您的想法。
There are many acronyms to use, but my favourite isEEE:
- 解释，详尽的例子
You don’t necessarily have to use this if you’re writing perfectly coherent and flowing paragraphs.
但是对于我们大多数人来说，遵循这种结构可确保一个很好的段落：
解释：The inability of countries to create coherent and consistent action against transnational crime and drug syndicates in particular highlight a major weakness in international measures against transnational crime.
精心制作的: Despite the existence of anti-drug measures adopted internationally, such as the Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs (1961) and the Convention against the Illicit Traffic in Narcotic Drugs and Psychotropic Substances (1988), the continued pervasiveness of large-scale drug trafficking reveals the inadequacy of these laws to target the root cause of international drug crime.
Example:Operation Dayu, a crackdown by Australian authorities on money laundering and drug trafficking centred in Macau, revealed the “monumental struggle against global, multibillion-dollar crime behemoths” (McKenzie, Sydney Morning Herald, 2013).”
最后，用链接句子完成段落，这使您的观点回到了论文中。
例如，“因此，很明显，打击毒品贩运的国际措施尚未有效消除毒品犯罪。”
Step 3: Conclusion
This is where youre-state your thesis,which in other words, is re-phrasing it.
之后，为了加强原始观点（论文）的目的，重新调整了您提出的要点。
At this point, do not add any new examples or ideas, ever!
例如：
It is clear that issues of state sovereignty and the complexity of international cooperation have yet to be properly addressed with measures against international crime. This has resulted in a moderately effective system of combating international trade, people smuggling and money laundering. The inability of the law in allowing cooperation between nations, as well as a lack of understanding of the core of international crime is evident.
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Sophia Zoucompleted the HSC in a while back in 2013, however still considers it her mission here to help students make the most of their final years at high school. Her interests include political science, Simon and Garfunkel, and pretending to be a tea aficionado. Alongside tutoring at Art of Smart Education, she spends her time playing the piano and studying Government & IR and Languages at the University of Sydney.
